Kan iemand helpen?
Ik weet, ik heb al een tijdje niet meer geschreven. Maar jullie zullen me vast niet gemist hebben. Fieuw!
Ik heb een liedje geschreven, maar kan iemand me helpen?
Ik ben niet zo goed in engels, dus als je goed bent in engels kan je dan m'n tekst verbeteren?
Het is vooral veel herhaling. Heel erg bedankt
Tekst:
There is so much happened
There is so much lost
but we have to fight
until the end
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
It seems like you need me
tell me if you want
what your worries about
you can trust me
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
Ik heb een liedje geschreven, maar kan iemand me helpen?
Ik ben niet zo goed in engels, dus als je goed bent in engels kan je dan m'n tekst verbeteren?
Het is vooral veel herhaling. Heel erg bedankt
Tekst:
There is so much happened
There is so much lost
but we have to fight
until the end
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
It seems like you need me
tell me if you want
what your worries about
you can trust me
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
I don't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
30 aug 2011
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snarf148
dinsdag 30 augustus 2011 16:35
hier met wat verbeteringen, ziet er goed uit trouwens
So much has happened
So much is lost
But we have to fight
Until the end
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I won't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
It seems like you need me
tell me, if you want
what your worries are about
you can trust me
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I won't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
I'll always be there for you
I will never leave you
I won't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now
I won't let you go
with all the pain
and all the worries
you've got now -
Roseslife
dinsdag 30 augustus 2011 16:36
Hey coewl
naamgenoot -
Liesje3107 (opgeheven op 18-9-2013)
donderdag 01 september 2011 19:17
leuk!
goed geschreven !
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